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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-10-26 07:38 AM


NOTHING IS THE SAME:

I love you like the ocean loves the shore
And the desert loves the rain
On one here on this earth means more
Nothing is the same.

© Copyright 2000 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-10-26 09:57 AM


As always, a wonderful piece of writing!    Those first two lines are soooo strong!  How true your words are.   Take care!
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-26 06:18 PM


very nice piece.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-10-26 06:59 PM


So poignant and sad hon, poetry is short but at it's finest.....
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


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