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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-10-26 05:48 AM


Shut and shunned away from you,
Dirty dark,
I wrap a cocoon hiding view,
With rags he found tossed away
Dirty dark
And still hidden from the day,
In the piles of trashy silk,
Dark dirt
Smudging skin as white as milk,
But much marred and badly stained
Wrapped in rags
Transforming in years of pain,
Yet never to emerge free;
Butterfly:
Never will he ever be.

Gloom


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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-10-26 06:58 AM


You really portray  the image well with this one! Written very well indeed    Take care!
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-26 06:05 PM


well done indeed.
MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
3 posted 2000-10-27 12:00 PM


hey great poem...i really liked the ending n the vivid imagery
MiseryDivine

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