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Isis
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0 posted 2000-10-25 07:21 PM


I have to face it - I'm addicted,
Mentally, physically and emotionally,
Addicted to so many things,
Stemming from the roots of love.

I would cross oceans to merely touch you,
To bask in the prescense of your company,
For my fingers to merely caress your face or hair,
Absense indeed an Aphrodisiac for my soul.

To see your whole being 'light up',
To hear that laugh again,
I'd cross oceans of time to merely 'know' you,
My comrade, the other half of my soul, my friend.

Longing to again live every part of the emotional sphere,
Sharing highs and lows,
Sharing secrets,
Sharing how our lives may go.

Knowing you alone understand,
You comprehend the intricacies of me,
You are always straight forward in all we say and do,
Two souls united far beyond the understanding of you and me.

I NEED you in my life,
NEED your touch daily,
NEED your body close to mine,
You alone can save me.

These feelings BURN inside me night and day,
Nothing can change them
And I pray they never go away,
You, my love, are my God send.

Can NEVER get enough,
I'm so greedy when I'm around you,
Wanting to CHERISH every moment,
Every touch, every word because they come from you.

To dream of something else at night,
Other than you would be a treat,
If I can ever accomplish that,
It would be quite a feat.

Yes I AM addicted,
Proven beyond a doubt,
Help me soothe these cravings,
And maybe discover more while we're at it.

  


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*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 10-25-2000).]

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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-10-25 07:50 PM


Love. isis...you got it bad...but its so good too! great stuff. Ron
Isis
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2 posted 2000-10-25 08:00 PM


Thanks Ron but I haven't just a mind scenario I'm afraid  
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Sven
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3 posted 2000-10-25 11:00 PM


Isis,
      some additctions are good aren't they??  

Great poem. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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4 posted 2000-10-25 11:07 PM


They CAN be I suppose LOL  Thanks Sven  

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


MiseryDivine
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
5 posted 2000-10-26 12:00 PM


wow....this is so incredibly awesome...i really loved it!!!!  
Isis
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6 posted 2000-10-26 12:07 PM


Thanks MD just a way I've felt in the past.. Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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7 posted 2000-10-26 02:56 AM


~This is unbeleivably brilliant writting...I must admit I am addicted too....LOL...is there help for it?...hahaha!!~

~Cherie~

Isis
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8 posted 2000-10-26 07:07 PM


I don't know Beth death or fulfillment perhaps???  LOL  Thanks for reading......
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
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Perth, Western Australia, Australia
9 posted 2000-10-29 01:37 AM


WOW....almost as if a page of my life has been written here....love..so universal in its pain and pleasure. it hurts to be addicted to love sometimes, but i dont think i want to break that addiction!! wonderful poem Isis..well felt.
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28
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Missing Since 1999
10 posted 2000-10-29 01:43 AM


I know what it's like to feel like you're in withdrawal! You express it well.

Much love all,
Krissie

~*Those words...
Oh, how I long to hear
...those words
Tell me...*~



taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

11 posted 2000-10-29 02:04 AM


Isis - WOW!  This is just great    And yeah, understand it.
Take care  
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

12 posted 2000-10-29 06:09 AM


Wow, this really hits home for me!!!
In my case, I sometimes believe that's it's not even addiction anymore... maybe some kind of obsession... Wow. I totally relate, amazing! Thanks for sharing, take care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
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13 posted 2000-10-29 10:52 AM


ooooooo I liked this one!  Very vivid and full of emotions that are heated!  I too have felt that addiction....sometimes way too much!  Great job Isis!
stoned'
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14 posted 2000-10-29 01:20 PM


Wow isis thats amazing ....there are some lines i can really relate to!keep it up
Isis
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Sunny Queensland
15 posted 2000-10-29 06:31 PM


It does this addicted soul good to see these responses, to know I'm not mental after all!!
Thanks everyone  
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp

Isis
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Sunny Queensland
16 posted 2000-10-29 08:01 PM


Just adding to library..
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp

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