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I Remember |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I remember sparkling days of dreams come true moonlit eves of loving you. I remember steaming words of silky fire nearly dying of desire. I remember plans of future promise bright desperate need to hold you tight. You forgot promised days of past returned passions glow that always burned. You forgot magic words that made me smile all our fantasies of style. You forgot dreams of love we should have had how to take away my sad. You forgot to love me.. But I remember..... |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
Girl, that was so beautiful and sad and disheartening, but with a clear message. It was so good. My favorite one, thus far, since I am new here. I loved it. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra...Most excellent. Exceptionally well constructed and worded. Great message....I love it. Good show!! Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh Cat this is heart breaking and a real tear jerker! Good expressions tho. Peace DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Someone didn't deserve your heart if they forgot that much. Ron |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hopefully your heart will heal soon sandra..nicely written..  HUGS~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Funny how fast "we" forget......I like this one,VERY much! Thanx!! Click |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
As always, wonderful P.L.U.R. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
AWESOME! This one just flowed so easy and was just an awesome read for me. You captured the point so well from start to finish. And I love the way you used certain words over again to drive the point home. I reallllllly enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Why is it that WE always remember, and THEY always forget? I don't think he's forgotten you. It's simply not possible. Beautiful writing. Love, Elise |
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