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Words -- Not Mine |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law But I warn you Star, you may just fall Listen and take heed to all of my words My lies are sacred, they're not yours to disturb If you dare cross me, it will be your last song I am your God, take care who you wrong But follow your faith and no hell will you feel For love is the law, love under will |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this was very a interesting poem, and an interesting view of religion. you did a wonderful job with the wording. the first line really caught me. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whetever, you've beaten them. |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Thank you Every man and every woman is a star. Love is the law, love under will. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful words in fact!!! Love IS the way.... (Couldn't resist that sorry) Indeed we are all stars and should never let our light dim....... Wonderful and inspirational hon  Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. btw - I love you sig Love is the law, love under will. |
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