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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia 
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Today he asked me.... What if we fell in love...what would you do??? And my heart sang mindless bliss... what would I do? So many answers, so little time.. melting, feeling..complicating things I would not take this lightly I would let you own my soul.. Life as I've known it would alter change Sweeping cobwebs from my heart. But, then... I stopped my senseless banter and asked... What if we fell in love... what would YOU do?? and he so simply, sweetly replied.. love you. [This message has been edited by firecrakker (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh awesomeness! *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Very sweet piece here. Nicely done. Good construction and thought pattern. Hardrock |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
What more can you ask for...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awwww...that's so cute....I loved it. Dark Star |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How romantic! A sweet poem!  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful poem and sentiments here hon. Generally speaking life is full of 'what if's' isn't it. I hope this what if works out beautifully for you both Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What if..GO for it and be happy, that's what Love this. Catalinamoon |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
and where are these wonderful men found? *sigh* i really liked this. it was sweet and made me all warm and happy inside. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whetever, you've beaten them. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Terrific poem Adored the ending! ~ Tara ~"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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stoned' Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 14 |
hey that was really sweet..wish all of us were as lucky as u r !! Gluck |
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