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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 80
Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2000-10-21 09:42 PM


How can he not see?
Not see what lays in front of him
A warm loving girl
Who only wants to love him
Her dreams, her hopes, her longings, and her world, they all revolve around him

It's hard for him, she knows
But still she waits
Through long days and even longer nights
She does not give up
She continues to fight between her head and her heart
Her head saying to stop the love any way she can, her heart saying to hold on to the hope
Day to day she suffers, becoming weaker, because of love


Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

© Copyright 2000 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-10-21 10:05 PM


I know that all too well...guys are blind (well, most are...) you should just try to move on if he obviously doesn't like you.

Dark Star

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-10-21 10:19 PM


Been there, still there, though not waiting anymore, cause he kicked me down the stairs and broke my heart. But wow, do I know the feeling. Take care.
Catalinamoon

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2000-10-22 08:06 AM


I really like this one Danielle... you've written it so well   Love can be a right pain sometimes!  Take care  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-10-23 10:39 AM


D...one-sided love is never good.  It just won't work....and you can't make it work.  An oft-told tale here....and you did it so well.  Very nice poem.  Hardrock
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