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Dark Poetry #2
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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 80
Providence, RI, USA
0 posted 2000-10-21 09:29 PM

The pain is gone
It has become nothing
Darkness falls in her eyes
After all of the pain and suffering she is finally free
Her heart no longer beats for him
Because it no longer beats at all


Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing
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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-10-21 09:59 PM

Aww...it shouldn't have to come to that! I mean I know the feeling, believe me I do...but cheer up...if you want to talk email me...as usual I liked your poem...

Dark Star
Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 80
Providence, RI, USA
2 posted 2000-10-21 10:07 PM

Thanks for the good praise Dark Star. I know my poems make me sound really depressed, but don't worry I'm not that unhappy. But thank you for letting me go to you if I need to talk.
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