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ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
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0 posted 2000-10-21 03:50 PM



He stroked my hair, in liberty
a priviledge he didn't earn
he'll be the teacher, I'll just learn.
He stroked my hair, where my shoulders were at
he didn't love me.
I don't understand that.

We'll go together, two play this game
but one will win, it's all the same,
I learned to loose and not to love.
When my tears threatened to wash my face
I looked back.
I don't understand that.

He loves me, loves me, loves me
More I beg, love isn't an issue anymore
if he can lift me til I break
he is gone.
I don't understand that.


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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-10-21 08:19 PM


awww....great poem...a lot of times people do stuff that we don't understand...I know the feeling of not being loved and loosing and all that....it's not fun...hope you feel a bit better about it though.

Dark Star

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