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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-10-20 10:21 PM


These feet of mine have walked
           Miles
     And seen many smiles
            But
    In this world of chaos
       Smiles only last
           Awhile.


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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Nikolette Sadness
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Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.
1 posted 2000-10-20 10:37 PM


omg!!!!!
glad to see you j...

oh wait..some memories for you...

"i only wish to know the age of the amazing writer...so someday i may marry his talent and become his pen man..."

love you...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-10-21 06:55 AM


Good to see you again Jeremiah... yeah, sad how the smiles only seem to last awhile sometimes.  

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-10-21 08:19 AM


Hey, JJ...welcome back Dude!!  Did you make the big move to Lexington?  I think people were beginning to think we ran off together since we both left at about the same time.  Glad to see back....and in great poetic form.  Hardrock
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-10-21 02:31 PM


Welcome back Jeremiah, and hope you stay awhile.
I know this poem well, too bad it is so true.
Sandra

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
5 posted 2000-10-21 02:50 PM


Jeremiah,

Wow.. such impact for so few words. Thank you, this was great!

Crakker


DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
6 posted 2000-10-22 03:17 PM


Nice to see you back...as always, a wonderful piece.

"The Sun is gone, but I have a Light" K.C.

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