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Echo of Desire
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Echo of Desire |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The veil of darkness, echoing desire smokey clouds aura, painted with fire shadows creeping, into the night black wings of a raven, soaring in flight scarlet passion so tempting, lusting ebony winds luring, raging, seducing flowing whispers, deep purple rain lavender mist, by morning will remain a grey wolf howling, in the moonlight nude trembling bodies, by candlelight < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love the use of all the colors in this. Excellent writing. And the plan, the dream, the wanting, that was the exact thing that was supposed to happen, and he took it away.. Why is life so cruel sometimes? Catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i know hon..but God works in mysterious ways..and someday you will know why..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
You've described this one very well  Sorta innocent. ~ Tara ~"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you tara...and for reading...appreciate your comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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