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silentsky
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 114


0 posted 2000-10-19 01:56 PM


i open up
my eyes
face
self
blinking
silence
at
you
daring
to
hope
you
see.

© Copyright 2000 silentsky - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-10-19 02:07 PM


I know this is short - but I think there's a lot beneath these few words - speaks much to one who looks...

Read my face or read my words. But please don't just look at either.

-Me

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-10-19 09:11 PM


Love it.

That need to be seen.
I understand it...

K

darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
3 posted 2000-10-19 09:29 PM


That's really cool how you wrote it...very good..I liked it..

Dark Star

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-10-19 09:30 PM


this is very nice. short, but meaningful.

jann elizabeth

Don't take any wooden nickels
When you sell your soul
-the eels

ilph
Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78

5 posted 2000-10-20 06:45 AM


shira

it really hits you with those one word lines.

of course i see you in this

i wonder if the you you hope to see is the child.

josh

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-10-20 08:58 AM


Shira,
I see you.
I see your works
I see the darkness
where sorrow lurks

I see you
don't give up the fight
I am waiting
here in the light.

Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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