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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i wrote this a long time ago...in 99...its about playing a part...and decieving the world around us... ~Pretty Face~ she hides her sadness behind that pretty face inside she feels like she's a disgrace to the world she keeps the pace to herself she's out of place her life she takes and what a shame she died so young with such a pretty face Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Nik, good to see you again. I have been gone, and you haven't been here much lately either. Well, this is sad, but a very nice poem, and should give all of us something to think about. Its hard to try to look happy on the outside when crying on the inside. Are you still so sad? Me too.. Peace Catalinamoon |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
lovely work Nikolette it really does sound like me rite now ... to see others happy we all have to do this from time to time ... CrEaTuRe Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awww...that's a really good poem Nik...I know that feeling well...really nicely put... Dark Star |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik, good poem, it's good to see you back at dark. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Nik, nice to see you back!  This is great piece, have anything recent? I'd love to read. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Nikolette, This is a lovely, yet sad poem..and I have to agree with catalina, it makes you think. There are so many beautiful people in this world..while we may admire them on the outside, how many would we trade places with on the inside? Crakker |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thank you all for your replies...and well i really haven 't been writing anything good lately... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nik~I'm so glad I ventured into Dark and found this one. It's really true, sometimes makeup and beauty are used as masks. Don't worry about not being able to write, everyone gets writer's block sometimes. Until last Tuesday when I wrote my latest poem, I hadn't written one in over 3 months. Just keep it up as you can. See you around! Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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