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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-10-17 10:29 PM


Would you like some blood to drink,
now that you're a vampire?
Opened all my veins of love
threw me in the fire.

Drops of passion spill to earth,
heart ripped out so cruely.
Now I lay in tears of blood
this is how you use me.

Feel my blood all over you,
remains of your last kiss.
Hot blood left with no use now,
go on and take the rest...

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-10-17 11:27 PM


it's been a long time since i've been in here and i'm sorry for all i have missed. i see alot of people have left this place and new people have came that's always good. this is a great piece as i remember all your work is. i'm going to be in here alot more than i have. so this is one friend you've got back.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

2 posted 2000-10-18 12:12 PM


Wow! Poweful piece! I too have been gone awhile. It's very good to be back, and see that you and others are still here writing. Take Care!

      ~Sash~


LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-10-18 06:11 PM


AAAwwww.... loved the last stanza...
Great piece, loved it!
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-10-18 07:53 PM


~Sandra,...*sigh*. Very powerful indeed. Very. I'm right here....Please take care. *Peace.
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