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star 15
Junior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 26

0 posted 2000-10-17 10:22 PM

ive loved
ive lauged
ive cryed
ive died.

ive lost
ive one
ive havent even begun.

ive kissed
ive missed

ive lived
ive laughed
ive loved
ive hated
ive tried

ive done all these things,
but where has it got me
what has it done,
nothing.

i hope this kinda makes sense how i feel right now
its just at the tip of my head

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-10-18 04:55 AM

It makes sense...sometimes I think we all feel like our efforts are fruitless - our achievements and experiences pointless.

Nice to see you here...

K

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2000-10-18 11:56 AM

isn't that the truth - I think you'll find very few who don't understand this, and even fewer who haven't experienced it.

Welcome,

Christopher

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-10-18 01:03 PM

i agree with Christopher. i think everyone has wondered what all their emotions have earned them. i liked this.

jann elizabeth

Don't take any wooden nickels
When you sell your soul
-the eels

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-10-18 11:47 PM

Yes,I know the feeling. Very good stuff.
Catalinamoon

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

5 posted 2000-10-18 11:49 PM

simple....but thoughtful...i liked it

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

6 posted 2000-10-19 09:42 PM

I know what you mean...really good poem..

Dark Star

star 15
Junior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 26

7 posted 2000-10-19 09:58 PM

thanks everyone for ur replys....i wasnt sure if it made any sense...i wrote it and i read it over and over and i was going to change some but i left it alone.....
thanks agian....star

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

8 posted 2000-10-20 01:10 PM

Hi Star.
Makes sense to me. It's how I've felt lately. Like no matter what I've done or what I do it won't make any difference to anyone.

Joy

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

9 posted 2000-10-20 04:32 PM

I like the way you put this together.

ive lived
ive laughed
ive loved
ive hated
ive tried

I guess things don't account to nothing, do they? Because we always learn something.

Take care. ~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2000-10-21 03:13 AM

Star15,
I know how you feel. Good, simple poem though.
Be well
Kethry.

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2000-10-21 05:02 AM

I believe all of these experiences have made you who you are today and will lead you to who you will become tomorrow...James

star 15
Junior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 26

12 posted 2000-10-21 02:23 PM

thanks james and kethy, for you replys.....
i enjoy reading them....agian thanks for everyone who sent me some replys....
and james thanks for ur tips u emailed me......thankyou agian everyone and keep them coming....star15

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