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ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149


0 posted 2000-10-17 01:00 PM


Continuing foward I see
the evils that lingers within me
the darkness of clouds
that cover my eyes and make me blind
the sun i will never see
but only through my mind
the sounds of chimes
getting louder and louder in the wind
the time has come for me to give in
i see the men and women
i see the children and the old
but where am I headed its too damn cold
Its pulling me in
and no one's there to help me
my arms are outreached
God please just forgive me
the world makes no sense
my life is nowhere where it needs to be
i've lost my sanity completely
lost souls cover my mouth
so I won't speak
No one wants to hear the truth
so the truth did never leak
I hear nothing but whispers of the dead
it's not just me
I hear them in and outside my head
No one knows the evil that lingers within
I go through this world with an evil grin
Want to walk with me in darkness
hand in hand we both will see
want to talk with me in darkness
and evil we both shall speak
want to hear with me in darkness
and whispers will overflow
want to live with me in darkness
and into the light you will never go......



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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-10-17 08:02 PM


Back with a vengence!  Wonderful work again hon.  I gotta know though - why do you ask people to join you in your dark abyss?  Why not ask for someone to help you out of it??
Just wondering???  Great stuff hon  
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


star 15
Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26

2 posted 2000-10-17 10:28 PM


hi i thought this was awsome. some great work well done. hope to see more.
hey could u give me some hints.....?

MiseryDivine
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
3 posted 2000-10-18 12:27 PM


whoooaaaa! that was incredible! i loved it! hey, ill join you anytime...im already there....hehe....take care! love the work!

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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