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Second Hand Heart |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Can you love my second hand heart? The original owner took it apart. Now it won't go together the way that it should And it doesn't work all that good. Can you trust it to be true? Even if at first it didn't belong to you? Can you make it to be your own? Take it to the place you call home. Twisted and dented, but only slightly used. Never intended for it to be abused. I hope you got the best deal that you could. Even if it doesn't work like it should. Take me with you it'll work just fine. You'LL get a bargin in all that is mine..... Click |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is great, Click. I hope this time your heart does not get abused. cat... |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
I like this poem, my heart's also second hand. HAHA its been in the thrift stores for a good while. But keep up the good reading. Much love, ONe love peace.... |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Second hand does not always mean second best. You, as well as I, may remember a Sandy heart that we felt was ripe for the picking. If only the chance was given....Nice work! ~Sash~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...trust usually does become an issue when our heart has been broken by another...James |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Greatly written here, Click.  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I think Sash said it perfectly - "Second hand doesn't mean second best." Interesting poem here - though the thought's not new, this was stiff fresh - and no less true - I think many of us suffer the curse of a second hand heart. Christopher |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
What an all to real image that painted of my own heart.....it was very well expresed. Best |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, Click, this is just great! How you managed to put my feelings and thoughts so wonderfully... Great job! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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