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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-10-16 09:26 PM

If you could see,
What I could be,
Then you would,
Just let me breathe,

If you could understand,
The way things work here on end,
Promising your hand to me you lend,
Wishing my life you would not amend,

If you could leave me unaided,
I will not feel completely raided,
Feeling my life finally shaded,

If you could feel this sting,
Realizing broken promises people bring,
You could hear the chorus ring,
Wildly bleeding as they sing,

If you could somehow survive through my life,
I am more than willing to make you my wife.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-10-16 10:25 PM

Lots of requirements there, and I hope you find them. Good idea to ask up front.

Catalinamoon

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-11-06 09:32 PM

wow this is really good nox. what a wish...my heart feels the same, but i am not the king of imagery like you, so i can't put it in words like this!!! wonderful read.

kynder

"Full is not heavy as
empty, not nearly, my love,
not nearly...."

Fiona Apple

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-11-06 10:34 PM

If you could feel this sting,
Realizing broken promises people bring,
You could hear the chorus ring,
Wildly bleeding as they sing,

better to let those know what you seek than seek those you do not know.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-11-06 11:27 PM

This was great. I hope you find somebody to match!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-11-08 01:24 AM

Thank you for your awesome responses. I love you guys.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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