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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-15 01:58 PM


              

In the deep shadows of dark impassion
the lavender winds billow in the night
the ebony moon is my dark potion
as dark romance screams in delight
eyes of darkness, they arouse and excite
dreams of the gothic, stir in my head
bells in the belfry,as bats soar in flight
torrid wild kisses, envelope my bed
dreams of vampires, blood of crimson red
dark eternal life, loathing the sweet dawn
creeping in the night, one of the dead
power and evil, his strength I am drawn
goddess of the night, tempted by lust
only in my dreams, my dreams I entrust



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-15-2000).]

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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-10-16 12:02 PM


Thought provoking poem. great work.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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2 posted 2000-10-16 04:12 AM


Nice and dark...James
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3 posted 2000-10-16 11:41 AM


Thank you Xeonox and James for reading..i do appreciate your comments.. thank you for visiting.

                      ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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4 posted 2000-10-16 07:30 PM


one can hear the deep dark knell of the bell. . . calling home the spirits from the dark. . .

excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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5 posted 2000-10-17 12:26 PM


Thank you Sven..nice to hear from you again tonight..glad you liked..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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