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kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-10-14 10:50 AM


Tears

flagrant winter winds
frosty words slash the soul
Tears make Icicles



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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



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sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-10-14 01:21 PM


Tears can sting no matter what season it is...They can also be very theraputic. Enjoyed this. Take Care..

         ~Sash~


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-10-14 07:49 PM


kitkat...this is a nice little haiku...I think tears can make icicles at any time, right inside - even though they can burn your cheeks.

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."


From Jack Maggs


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-10-14 11:59 PM


Perfection tears are indeed doubly cold physically and emotionally.  Great stuff  

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-11-12 08:08 PM


very good!!!  so full of imagery.  loved it!!

kynder

"Full is not heavy as
empty, not nearly, my love,
not nearly...."

Fiona Apple

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