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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-12 11:40 PM


I look in the mirror,

I see myself,

Is that me trapped somewhere,

Seem so peaceful and free of care,

I advance towards my appearance,

It shatters the mirrors and seems to run,

Leaving me alone with this desire that burns.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Rosebud1229
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1 posted 2000-10-13 11:05 AM


quite powerful , as far as the mirror and the reflection to often I believe when we look into the mirror we see our true reflections and maybe that's why we tend to want to run, you captured this perfectly
kynder
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2 posted 2000-11-08 08:47 PM


it really sucks when not even we hold the answers to ourselves.  excellent work as always, noxie!!!

kynder

"Full is not heavy as
empty, not nearly, my love,
not nearly...."

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Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-11-08 09:13 PM


This is screming the question,
Who Am I?  ...and do we really see ourselves? Or are we just afraid to face our truths?...a brain teaser...great work.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



firecrakker
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4 posted 2000-11-08 10:10 PM


I agree completely with Ron... and in this piece, I see many different feelings..but your title expresses the overall finding, and that is acceptance of all. Great job!

Crakker

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5 posted 2000-11-09 10:13 PM


I think that to be able to accept others for who they are we must first accept ourselves.
The harshest critic of one is that same person.
such is life i guess.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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