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0 posted 2000-10-09 02:42 PM



Look, a human has arrived,
Seems to me, he is ready to give,

Sanity of his my lord you shall eat,
Who devours his freedom I do not care,
His hope and joy I’ll take my share,

His soul will be toyed,
He hopes this choice he could void,

Too late now that the feast has started,
From this faith, no human will be parted.


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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1 posted 2000-10-09 07:14 PM


Wow!! Many levels touched....and felt..
Good write!

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2 posted 2000-10-09 07:52 PM


Your writings are so dark and profound...I lose myself in your writings every single time...........beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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