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0 posted 2000-10-08 12:12 PM



My lord, what of me you ask?
Is it not the same old task?
Luring humans by the mere wishes,
Isn’t that routine a little bit childish?

Time and time again they fall,
They do not recall how they entered your hall,
Wishing that they never took the offer,
Now they must surrender and suffer,

Your methods of torture are unknown on earth,
Never knew they were applied starting at birth,

This senseless souls why must we scare?
“Because they choose to live a life free of care” (“Devil’s” reply)


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
darkstar
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1 posted 2000-10-08 10:55 AM


Something to think about...cool poem...

Dark Star

bluebrdy65
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2 posted 2000-10-08 05:00 PM


This is really deep
yeah it really makes you think
great job
bluebrdy

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3 posted 2000-10-08 07:39 PM


Great job, i thought the poem was great!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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