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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-05 05:03 PM


Velvet diamonds of darkness, caresses the night
Awakening my soul, my passion and lust
Dark billowy clouds, dancing with the moon
Stalking the night, with shadows of desire
Dark phantom winds, calling my name
Screaming in the night, seducing my thoughts
Moonlight of pleasure, in ebony heavens
Bringing your aura, crimson aura to me
Shadowy fingertips, in the chill of the night
Haunting my flesh, sensuously with delight



Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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Gladys,
1 posted 2000-10-05 05:09 PM


AWESOME POEM
I really loved it
bluebrdy

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2 posted 2000-10-05 06:50 PM


Your writings are so enchanting and magical...  I feel connected to this one in particular.  ..........beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Victoria
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3 posted 2000-10-05 08:07 PM


Thank you Beth and bluebrdy65..so glad you enjoyed my poem...gives me a reason to keep writing..
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4 posted 2000-10-06 04:56 AM


This is just fabulous work, I love it! Please keep writing.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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5 posted 2000-10-06 06:50 AM


Victoria - this is great writing...

Bringing your aura, crimson aura to me
Shadowy fingertips, in the chill of the night
Haunting my flesh, sensuously with delight

Love these last lines in particular...

K

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-10-06 11:02 AM


Thank you so much Eagle one and Severn, makes me happy that you enjoyed..
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