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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-10-05 03:14 PM


again

yes I'm doing it again
my life fell apart again
why is this happening again?
can't I be happy again?
nobody loves me again
nobody cares again
they all just hate me again
so I cry at night again
I crawl in bed again
put the covers over my head again
try to block it out again
wish life was kind to me again
wishing I could die again
I'm seeing the crimson stains again
I'm seeing the lines on my skin again
why am I doing this again?
because it's all starting again


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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-10-05 05:03 PM


Man do I know how you feel here
I hope things get better
great poem I really enjoyed it
bluebrdy

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
2 posted 2000-10-05 09:13 PM


Thanks...I don't know why this always seems to happen to me...can't stay normal I guess..

Dark Star

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-10-05 10:08 PM


Darkstar~
They say things happen for a reason. But I wonder about that when it deals with pain. Why does such hurtful stuff happen? What is the reason for it? You expressed what you had to say very well. Keep it up!


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-10-06 09:51 AM


Darkstar, first you have to realize that no one is normal so don't try to 'get there'! If we were all alike, life would be boring! I think it may help you to keep writing about your feelings but also get some counseling, please. And we are all here, willing to listen when you need a friend. That is, if you don't mind that WE aren't normal either! Stay strong and don't be so hard on yourself! Take care.  
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