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Dark Poetry #2

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**Tammy**
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 14

0 posted 2000-10-03 07:45 PM

Thanks for caring. but yet you tell me to "get serious now" what was up with that?
you say your there. but your never around.
you laught in my face, you put me on the spot, you won't look at me, but when you do you give looks that could kill. so I say to you now just wait I will get you back!

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

1 posted 2000-10-04 02:45 AM

TRY FORMATTING YOUR POEM DIFFERENTLY TO MAKE IT APPEAR MORE"POETIC". IT SEEMS MORE LIKE AN EXCERPT FROM A CONVERSATION.

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

2 posted 2000-10-04 03:02 AM

If he/she has hurt you, don't try to get even. Please don't try to do anything spiteful, but please try to understand yourself and find the depth of the situation.

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