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JSage
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since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA

0 posted 2000-10-03 02:30 PM



Poetic pen you spoke to me
And I listened
Unafraid of what I might hear
I listened
Bleeding heart
To your cries
As I tried not to die with you
Holding on to my own head
I listened
Little girl so lost within
To you, I listened
Until my pen and heart
Lay bleeding on the bed beside you
I listened
To each trickle of truth
You taught me through my past
And in my memories
Little girl
To you I listen
Because only you can save me
And to each last drop of your blood
Running through my veins
Out of my heart
And onto the page
To your silent still wisdom
Little girl so lost within
To you,
I listen
To you,
I will always listen

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silentsky
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114

1 posted 2000-10-03 03:39 PM


this poem...i think its what every girl like me dreams of possibly.
so i held my breath while reading it  
really well written, i especially like the end:
To your silent still wisdom
Little girl so lost within
To you,
I listen
To you,
I will always listen

thank you,
shira

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