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shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
Posts 85


0 posted 2000-10-02 02:06 PM


blinking lights
scary sights
within my mind
the eternal fight

right and wrong
weak and strong
within my head
the fight goes on

now i'm lost
the lines been crossed
in the mix
is sanity tossed

yeng and yang
in my brain
truth be known
i'm insane

music, money, sex, and blood
steal my innocense, corrupt my good
how i wish i never would
have open the gates of dimentia flood


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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-10-02 03:47 PM


Pretty intense poem here
loved it keep up the good work
Bluebrdy65

jlocke
Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
2 posted 2000-10-02 03:59 PM


shadydaze,
  

Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law.
Love is the law, love under will.


Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-10-02 06:38 PM


this was very interesting. i liked it.
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