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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-30 12:32 PM


FOREVER?

Is love just an ilusion?
I hate al this confusion!
Is it meant to be or not?
Must cherish what we've got.
Yes, we are together,
but will it last forever?
Do you hear me think about you?
Everything I feel is true,
& I hope you feel it too.
I'm wising that I was,
all you've ever dreamed of.
When you walked in,
you showed me I could love again.
You rescued me,
& made me see,
that life is worth living,
& all the love to you is worth giving.
So will this last forever?
Or will it painfully end?
I want this for a lifetime,
& if you do too, we can!

ELMO & KEITH~ 1 year, 4 months, & 2 days

© Copyright 2000 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-30 01:55 PM


Wow Elmo you and your boyfriend have been together a long time. I think that it could last forever if you let it. He sounds like a really good guy. You made a clear picture of him throughout all your work. Keep up the good work!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
2 posted 2000-09-30 07:21 PM


ah I question that, But it looks like you 2 were made for each other. And you have lasted a year, so things look good

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2000-09-30 10:27 PM


Yea thanx guys, things have kinda been fallin apart for us lately though.
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