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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-29 10:41 PM


FRIEND NO MORE

What are friends for?
I really couldn't say much more.
You just don't understand,
how to be a friend.
You can't just ditch me,
& expect things to stay the same.
If you could only see what i see,
then you might notice,
you're not all that good to me.
You have betrayed my trust,
& when I see you again,
I will realize I shouldn't be upset,
that we went our separate ways.
The truth is you used me for popularity,
& turned many guys against me.
But I was such a fool,
& excepted every apology.
My life is so different,
because of your influence.
I'm looked at different,
because of you.
I've lost friends,
because of you.
I've lost everything,
all because of you,
& I know it really wasn't worth it.

LOVE ELMO <3



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1 posted 2000-09-30 03:28 AM


Another great poem.!!!!!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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2 posted 2000-09-30 02:02 PM


Elmo~~~My best friend has been acting really strange to the point where I dont know. And I dont know what I would do without her but I am slowly realizing. I was gonna give up on our friendship until I read this. It would cause so much pain. And it would be really hard without her. Thank you very much for sharing this.

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

boardman
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since 2000-05-09
Posts 44

3 posted 2000-09-30 06:04 PM


Hi Elmo,

What can I say? I've definitely been there.

You surely have a nice way to sum it all up!
Nice piece.

On a side note - Believe me, there are men in this world that are entirely different from the STANDARD jerk!

Have a great day.

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-09-30 10:36 PM


Thanx & Erin glad i could help. My best friend of 13 years (since kindergarten) wasn't all that good to me. I drew the line though when she tried to steal keith   & boardman yea I've had my experience with jerks lol   LOVE ELMO <3
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