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Everynight......A tale of a lonely heart

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gjam
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0 posted 09-29-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for gjam   Email gjam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gjam




...Sitting
wondering...
chatting.....boring

....Still wondering...thinking
asking myself......why?
  why?......home alone
...what to do
  where to go...
I just want to find you

Sitting.....wondering
.....still home alone
Where are you
.....why don't you
just come home?

....Whoever you are
wherever you may be
....just curious if your
sitting....looking
....wondering about me.




[This message has been edited by gjam (edited 09-29-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Greg Jamison - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 09-29-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

How many lonely nights there are, and I too have wondered, is there someone out there meant to be with me? And why can't we find eachother? Great thoughts.
Sandra
Isis
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2 posted 09-29-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I can relate!!  And this can be construed different ways so it'll fit many possible stories.. Well done  

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Erin
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3 posted 09-30-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

Wow I am amazed. I like this, the way you formatted it, your thoughts and most of all just the way you wrote it. I hope to see more like it.

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.
Cyndey
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4 posted 09-30-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

I too have sat many nights just wondering if there was someone out there for me, wondering if our paths would ever cross... I thought the way you wrote your illustrated a very pensive nature of us. great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!  

Cyndey


"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe
darkstar
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5 posted 09-30-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for darkstar   Email darkstar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit darkstar's Home Page   View IP for darkstar

Cool poem...I feel like that a lot too...I like the way you wrote it..


Dark Star
boardman
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6 posted 09-30-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for boardman   Email boardman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for boardman

Hi,

Boy did you hit a nerve on this one!
So, when did you take up mind reading?
You just about wrote down what I think every night. Oops!

Wonderful poem. Keep up the good work.

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman
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7 posted 09-30-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

yeah I agree you've put it soooo true

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

gjam
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8 posted 09-30-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for gjam   Email gjam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gjam

Thanks everyone for the replies....I was in here last night....reading some poems and this one came to me.....it is what I think of constantly...just decided to express it...glad you like it.....this one is written different from my usual style...
I have had no inspiration lately because the situation I constatly wrote about is over....I was glad to write this one....Greg
gjam
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9 posted 10-14-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for gjam   Email gjam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gjam

Thanks everyone...i haven't wrote much lately...I need to get back to it...
gjam
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10 posted 02-14-2001 07:28 PM       View Profile for gjam   Email gjam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gjam

im still sitting and waiting..hehe
guess i need to consider pt. 2 hehe
 
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