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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-09-29 12:54 PM


He wants to control
He rapes her in the forest
He hates all women

Firing twice she kills
Lung punctured, brain shattered
He cries for mother

© Copyright 2000 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-29 03:24 PM


Wow I dont know what to say to this
scary
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-09-30 09:15 AM


Yes I can see how a man that hates women would still cry for his mother when he is dying.
As we all breath our last breath from old age, disease, a victim of war, a death row prisoner...who do we cry out for in desperation...our God, our father, our family...our friends, or our mother...James

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-10-02 04:13 PM


wow. that says so many things in so few words.
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