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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-29 10:54 AM


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gjam
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since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-09-29 01:17 PM


Another great poem....the things you say feel like out of my head and my life...good job..Greg
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-29 01:46 PM


Elmo~~~I like this one. I really like the end part where you said your heart controls your head. That was good. Thanks for sharing this!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2000-09-29 10:25 PM


Thanx guys   I like hearing that I'm not the only one w/theze problems, maybe thats why i luv it here soo much. Every1 is soo nice & real   thanx LOVE ELMO <3
Holden
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since 1999-12-23
Posts 26
Brighton East, Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2000-09-29 11:43 PM


I really hate to say it, but...THIS POEM IS NOT YOURS!!!  I wrote this to my girlfriend, word for word, over 10 months ago.  I just read it and I am totally shocked that it was posted by someone else since I posted it over 6 months ago.  This makes me extremely annoyed and also VERY cautious in EVER posting another poem on this site if they are just going to get ripped off by someone else...All I can cay is...HOW COULD YOU???  How do you sleep at night?

'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2000-09-30 12:14 PM


sorry guys this ones not mine it was mixed up with a bunch of poems & i had forgotten where it came from
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