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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
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0 posted 2000-09-29 10:01 AM




Under the Stars with YOU
On a moonlit night
Gazing into YOUR warm eyes
I can see eternity
All fades away
as I melt into YOU
The waves gently rolling
Rushing over our nakedness
I am entangled within YOU
Right where I long to be
And my heart beats faster
Than the speed of light
YOU make me tremble
For YOU give me sheer delight
It is YOU  my dear that I want
Here in this moonlit lagoon
And NO ONE else will do
For all I dream of is

YOU!


© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2000-09-29 10:39 AM


Awe that is so sweet, some1 most be really special   great poem LOVE ELMO <3
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-29 01:33 PM


This one is so sweet!!!Brought a smile to my face. Someone must be really special to you!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

DeathTrippy
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA
3 posted 2000-09-30 01:20 AM


Very touching.  I hope that your sombody special feels the same.
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