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That could've been me |
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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
You with your arm around her makes me sick to even think about that would've been me but she had to come into the picture and slowly kill me from the heart inside out taking me from me what she knew I would die without see that fake smile? She's mocking me I see it but too bad you don't you're blind and are being played like the fool you are you are the joker's jester so smooth you think you are come face reality baby that could've been me. *^~Do YoU WoRrY ThAt YoU'rE NoT LiKeD, HoW LoNg TiLL YoU BrEaK, YoU'Re HaPpY CaUsE YoU SmiLe BuT HoW MuCh CaN YoU FaKe?*~^ |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
oh i have so been there....screw them both...today i found out he is with someone who...who, every says, is just like me... people just suck!... oh and i like your signature too... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This post did not get the attention it deserved...I'VE BEEN THERE!!! I hate that girl...and you know what is even worse...WE'VE been that girl, too...you know that for every guy we date or hook up with, there is some girl hating us too! I really did relate to this one!.......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I would have to say Lady Lost said the right thing. We have been there. This girl that we hate was most likely us at one point. Im pretty sure that I can relate. My boyfriend now was with this girl before me and me & her were friends (not good friends just friends who talked occasionaly). Until they broke and me & him hooked up. I could only imagine what she said about me then. Good poem though! Loved every word of it. It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, it's great! It says so much, everyone can relate to this situation in one way or another. And chicks who do that intentionally just make me sick! But you know, sometimes "life has a funny way of helping you out when you think everything's gone wrong and everything blows up in your face..." I mean, that even when you think stuff happen for the worse, they actually are for the best (or at least it's something nice to tell yourself when everything sucks...  )Take Care, I hope everything works out for you! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i like this. its strong. youre over their heads. shira |
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