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Dark Poetry #2

Sweet Stacey

CitiZen-One
Member

since 2000-09-22

Posts 84
New Mexico

0 posted 2000-09-26 06:07 PM

Let me drown in your dark waves,
Let me kiss the pale milky dropplets.

Sometimes I love you,
Sometimes I hate you.

You keep me incheck and you keep me in line,
Words are like swine,
on you I would love to dine,

I would bring you to such levels and leave you dangling and high.

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

1 posted 2000-09-26 09:55 PM

I read this and try to feel your words...but I am distracted by the wish that my name is hers.

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2000-09-27 11:56 AM

Liked this one. Good imagery and symbolism.

Sometimes I love you,
Sometimes I hate you.

An interesting concept.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-09-27 02:59 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

4 posted 2000-10-02 03:54 PM

liked this. especially the last line.

Don't take any wooden nickels
When you sell your soul
Devil lover, time awaits you
Now the party's over
You're on your own

-the eels

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