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jlocke
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0 posted 2000-09-26 03:05 PM



Sometimes I write down my thoughts.
Sometimes that scares me.
You see I never know which way my pen will take me.
Sometimes I write of beautiful dreams.
Sometimes nightmares can’t even compare.
But still I write.
I write because it’s the only way to clear my head.
My head has thoughts that can’t always be said.
So I write and then it must be read.
But I don’t want it to be read.
Don’t want it to be read
For fear of what I might have said.
See when I write to clear my head
My head goes blank.
Blank as if I were dead.
And the things that I’ve read.
Oh the things that I’ve read.
Sometimes I think it were better
Better if I were dead.

jlocke

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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-09-26 04:11 PM


HHmmm... very intense piece, powerful words.
It helps me to write, eases up the tension... I hope you're OK, take care!



"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
2 posted 2000-09-26 04:27 PM


very nicely written... sometimes our pens just seem to take over and  have a mind of their own  

if you ever need to talk i'm just an email away  

Shan

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
3 posted 2000-09-26 04:31 PM


Hey thanks,
This was just thoughts I had a long time ago.  I'm very happy now and I can write without fear.   thanks again.


Love is the law, love under will.



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