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The Battle.... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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His eyes were that of crystal Glimmering through the night Little did I realize He had me in his sight I heard him whisper So softly my name It was surely time To play his death game I stood up tall Knowing I must win And if I didnt I would never see my kin I fought long and hard He had more power than me I had no inner strength I had no destiny My eyes became swollen From all the tears I cried This battle I have lost For today my soul has died No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Just awesome poem. Simply superb!!!! Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! The title is perfect for this piece, very powerful, and painful. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Amazing poem, I really loved it! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gothic feel to this yet has a dose of reality. Well done  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is powerful, and I believe the first I've read of yours, I am sorry to say, but it won't be the last. Kathleen |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Mags...went back to look up some of your poetry and found this one. As usual, I wasn't disappointed. Good stuff here. Enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
DkW, I am so glad this one was resurrected .. I had not read this before.. and it completely hooked me in. Well done!!!Sheila |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Wonderful poem! I can relate to it in soooooo many ways. You have a lot of strength, and it shows in your poetry time and time again. Thank you for sharing your awesome gift with us! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This is very well written and I too can relate to it on all levels, with the gender rolls reversed. It reminds me of the first poem I posted on the Dark Passions #1 forum. I'll e-mail that one to you so you can see what I mean. Anyways, I hope all is well with you. Keep up the good work!  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I come back from being gone for days, and everyone is so depressed...I can't understand it. I hope your soul hasn't died though I have my reasons  "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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