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Dark Poetry #2

Paranoia

DeathTrippy
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 45
WY USA

0 posted 2000-09-25 02:33 AM

You
Why hate me?
Your eyes tell me
You hate me
Why?

Eyes
They burn me
Stares of dry ice
Don't look at me
Paranoia

Hide
From your stare
Shelter from burning fire
Stop looking at me
Fear

Hate
Leave me be
I want to be loved
Go away hate
Leave

Die
Bittersweet darling
End the blackness of your eyes
Leave me be
Die

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-09-25 11:21 AM

Great poem. I fill that way sometimes.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

2 posted 2000-09-25 03:12 PM

That's a very cool poem....sorta reminds me of the tell-tale heart (because the whole eye thing and the die thing)

Dark Star

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

3 posted 2000-09-25 08:25 PM

oooh I know these feelings
They are no fun
but its odd what inspires us to write.
great Job
Keep it up
Bluebrdy

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