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chinaman
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since 2000-08-26
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0 posted 2000-09-24 09:40 PM


You can never bring me down to your level
You lie in a world of jealousy and lustiness
You're a soul sold long back to your sins
Let lord pardon your sins and show you the way


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1 posted 2000-09-25 12:22 PM


Quite an interesting short little poem you got here.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
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Gladys,
2 posted 2000-09-25 08:33 PM


There's some strong emotions here
Great Job
Bluebrdy

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