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blondegirl10101 Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16 |
i see a girl she looks so sad. her eyes so cold. eyes that tell a tragic tale of heart ache and pain. eyes that have seen way too much for there years. she smiles, but i could see though that phony front. inside she cries. she cries because she longed for a love. she had once given her heart only to have it thrown to the ground, left like a childs broken toy. she looks like she is in more pain than ever before.the rain, her lips tremble her tears fall like from all of the pain she raises her hand almost as if to reach out to me in need of help. SMASH the mirror breaks that girl was me. |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
well expressed poem...i feel like the girl in the poem..except im a guy....just gotta keep trying...someday |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW!!!I dont know what to say. You left me speechless with this one. Keep it up!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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