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LOTR
Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
New Jersey

0 posted 2000-09-24 12:10 PM


This will be my last posting for awhile, the flame has gone out and may never return.

   For my Goddess

   Thank You

   I want to say thank you.
   Thank you for the laughs you've given,
   Thank you for the kind words spoken,
   Thank you for listening to me when I rant,
   Thank you for telling me it will be alright.
   I want to thank you.
   Thank you for always making me smile,
   Thank you for helping me cry,
   Thank you for stopping the tears,
   Thank you for the shoulder you gave.
   I want to thank you,
   Thank you for the hugs you sent me,
   Thank you for the warm kisses we gave,
   Thank you for the love you gave me,
   Thank you for the passion we shared.
   I want to thank you,
   Thank you for showing me how to love again,
   Thank you for teaching me how to live again,
   Thank you for showing me it's ok to hurt,
   Thank you for telling me that life can go on.
   I want to thank you,
   Thank you for being my best friend,
   Thank you for being my greatest love,
   Thank you for inspiring me again,
   Thank you for being you.


Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

© Copyright 2000 Richi - All Rights Reserved
gjam
Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-09-24 12:26 PM


don't ever give up on writing....my fire has to burned out this week as i said goodbye and thank you to someone i loved....she inspired me to start writing poetry....now i'm unsure how to without her..but never give up.....you still have a heart....Greg
LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-25 08:30 AM


I have to agree with Greg, don't give up, writing helps soothing the pain. We're here for you to listen and we care, so if you feel like talking come back soon.
Take Care, I wish you all the best!



"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-25 01:47 PM


Whoever you wrote this for must be really special. You are thanking them for everything. So they must mean alot to you.

About not posting for awhile: Take your time just remember that we want to see you back soon!!!

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