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You gave up.
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You gave up. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
You Gave Up ...And one day you gave up without a fight. You said I killed your hope and messed your life, And crushed your heart and played you all along, Now you hate yourself for loving me so long... You said I hurt you bad and drove you mad So many angry words that emptied out my heart. You were a stranger then I've never met before Mutation of the guy who pledged his love and swore To love me more tomorrow than he did today And though my heart was pulling other way I needed you to stay and keep your patience, Perhaps you could have pulled in your direction. But talk is cheap while actions remain silent I never loved you though I really tried it And when you left so suddenly and cruelly Making me think I might have loved you truly I understood you've played my heart much more And now you're back to even up the score. "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW LM!!!This was incredible. I dont know what to say. I feel as if I am speechless. What a poem. Well it sounds like you are having a rough time right now. You know my email address if you ever wanna talk! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehe  Thanks ERIN, as always you warm my heart with your replies I don't really believe it's so great, i just wrote it coz I haven't written for a long time... been busy... Yes, this situation isn't new, I'll tell you in an e-mail you just write back finally!!!!  "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Wow unbelievable job LM I dont know what to say but I liked this one You are good. Blue |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
great piece man! i wished people could understand this feelings much more ;(Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thank you so much guys! Blue and CrEaTuRe It's so nice to hear such warm responces, feels really really good! Thank you for understanding when I don't really understand myself... |
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