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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-23 11:45 AM


DISTANT

When we fight without words,
the silence is the worst.
When your arms aren't around me,
I feel awkward to touch you 1st.
I don't know what to say,
when you're always right.
I don't know how to feel,
when I can't feel your love back.
How can I show you it matters to me,
when I don't even know,
if it really matters to you?
If I lost you, I'd lose my world,
but if you lost me, would you even lose?
You help me better myself in everyway
& show me where I go wrong,
but what back do I do?
I hate feeling distant from you!

~The littlest word Keith taught me is the most important! "TRY"~

"If I loved you a little bit longer, if our love was a little bit stronger, would you stay? I need you to stay! Please stay!"

LOVE ELMO <3


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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-09-23 05:10 PM


Oh... it's such a great expression of uncertainty... I can really understand this, nice job! Hope everything works out, Take Care!


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-09-23 08:04 PM


Thanx   Yea we are OK now, its really hard sometimes. LOVE ELMO <3
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
3 posted 2000-09-23 11:45 PM


Great Job Elmo
i can relate keep up the good work
Bluebrdy

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-09-24 10:27 AM


Thanx Bluebrdy   LOVE ELMO <3
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