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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
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Gladys,

0 posted 2000-09-23 10:22 AM


Like a shadow in the night,
just before the morning light.
My heart wants to take flight,
and this feeling I must fight,
I must do what is right.
Move our love to a greater height
This seems to be my only plight.

Mixed emotions I must fight
praying for a brighter light
to shine the dark armour
of my knight.

© Copyright 2000 Janie M. Williams - All Rights Reserved
a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-09-23 10:31 AM


Started to read, and must admitt was a bit dissapointed........UNTIL the end...
the end made it exactly what it is....
WONDERFUL......
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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2 posted 2000-09-24 12:31 PM


Great, short little poem.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2000-09-25 05:15 AM


Fabulous...James
DeathTrippy
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since 2000-07-15
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WY USA
4 posted 2000-09-25 12:29 PM


I agree the end is perfect!

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