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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-09-23 10:12 AM


( I apologize for my absence as of late...work calls endlessly)


Brutal Thoughts

Brutal thoughts of unrest twist viciously in my mind
disquised in feathered masks dancing sweet and kind
torturing my gasping soul
as it slides further into oblivions hole.
Spitting out profanity at the crumbling walls
of my own inner ghost lined halls.
Hallowed be the sufferance of my dark sanctuary
that screams with vengence at its own impurity
for the brutal thougts that devoure unforgivenly.


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-09-23 10:24 AM


WOW how unbelievably deep this is
Great Job

a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-09-23 10:40 AM


Many thank yous Bluebrdy...I am always afraid that when I am gone for a bit and then return that others will not understand or comprihend what I write...yet, here in DP...I find those that always do...
Thank you.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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