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JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

0 posted 2000-09-21 12:13 PM



Fifteen years ago
the doctor called
you and I sat together
as he explained the results
of that fateful bloodtest
You sat stunned
I'm sure not fully comprehending.
The only thing I could say was
"Okay, when do I die?"

At the birth of our first,
we rejoiced and cried,
waited six months and tested,
negative,
and again rejoiced and cried.

Four years later, our miracle second.
More rejoicing, less crying.
six months later tested and smiled.
Three years later, counts are low,
"Okay, when do I die?"
No, just take these meds...

Four years later and one more.
another miracle, another reason to rejoice.
Again, six months, test - Negative.
Old hat this, but still rejoicing.

Year later, counts extremely low.
Illnesses come and go,
odds are becoming low,
Finally I let people know.

Three more years to see
my first in cap and gown.
Preferably not from my
deathbed.





Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

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JSage
Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91
Nashua, NH USA
1 posted 2000-09-21 01:37 PM


I don't even know what to say in response to that.  Most people only write from their own experience and my heart goes out to you and your family.  You seem like a very strong person, though and that my friend should keep you alive.  Don't lose hope.

-Jes

JP
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
2 posted 2000-09-21 04:22 PM


Dum spiro, spero


Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
3 posted 2000-09-22 06:15 AM


This is a sad story
yet beautiful
great Job
blue

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
4 posted 2000-09-22 10:26 PM


never give up faith and always believe in miracles   funny how when you live your life that way miracles seem to come to you ... wishing you many more miracles and blessings in life

Shan

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