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morteZ
Junior Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-09-20 08:49 PM


i walk alone, in my
little box. i see cracks, flashes
little peices of dark
trying to consume
this pathetic peice of
dirt i inhabit. my refuge.
is it trying
to kill me?
or am i just
letting it?


"Is there another sadness besides that of death?
Definitly not, because true sadness is black,
devoid of charms, and dreamless."

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taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-09-20 10:06 PM


Hey this says soooo much!  Good imagery!    Liked it very much   Take Care!
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

silentsky
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114

2 posted 2000-09-21 01:11 PM


beautiful.
i face this question constantly.
shira

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