Dark Poetry #2 |
Ashes of Love |
JandR4Eva New Member
since 2000-09-20
Posts 9Jacksonville, FL |
Passion is a vine. Twisting & wrapping itself around every branch. Loneliness burns like a dark fire. Spreading rapidly, leaving no survivors. If Loneliness is left to burn, Passions forest would be gone. Leaving the Ashes of Love. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
First of all, let me welcome thee to Passions in Poetry. This poem is a highly emotional poem that paints a darkly beautiful picture, that I can see as I read it. Welcome!! --Little Girl |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Welcome to Passions! This is a great first post, and I hope to see more soon. This poem was done really well, I liked the way you compaired passion to a vine and loneliness to a fire. Very original, and very good. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey, welcome to DP! What a lovely poem, great debute, really enjoyed reading. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Great job I really enjoyed this poem keep up the good work Blue |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So very true. Worded perfectly. catalinamoon |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Really great poem...welcome to passions... Dark Star |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WELCOME Great PASSION poem to enter PASSIONS with LOL LOVE ELMO <3 |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
There is a very nicely placed touch in this one dearie .... a good piece for your first poem here.... Welcome to passion and believe me you'll really enjoy it here Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
There is a very nicely placed touch in this one dearie .... a good piece for your first poem here.... Welcome to passion and believe me you'll really enjoy it here Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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gjam Member
since 2000-08-23
Posts 85Arkansas |
Wow..what a great poem...it tells a complete story...so short but perfect..great job |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Indeed, welcome to Passions! Like ya poem... I could see what you were saying... terrifc! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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