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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-09-20 01:13 AM

So your baby father left you struggling,
You can’t give up now and leave your kids rumbling,

Homey was messed up from day one,
Calling you his sweet thing and his Hun,

Rolling in BMW, dropping ice in your lap,
You were after him like an uncontrollable sap,

He bought you clothes till your place was filled,
But little did you know that your innocence that he killed,

You dropped out for only fools stay in school,
He made you believe that this world you will rule,

Family and friends you left,
Secret from your friends you kept,

No time to think he left you with,
A little baby boy that little piece of ****.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

1 posted 2000-09-20 11:28 AM

to many people leave their lives in the hands of others, and when reality hits it hits hadr as a brick wall.

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-21 05:44 PM

Wow...great story! I really enjoyed reading.
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-21 05:55 PM

I would have to agree with DJLI just a little bit. But these guys today give up when things get tough. Mainly when they find out they are gonna have a baby. But anyways thank you for sharing this with us.

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

4 posted 2000-09-21 05:56 PM

great piece
So many girls go through this
If we only knew then what we know now
blue

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-09-22 02:40 PM

This poem is fictonal. I am a guy. I was trying to write a poem for someone(if it actually happen to someone I know), that would provide them some relief.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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